Punctuation
Welcome to my site!!!!! We, spent a lot of time making this, and hope that you thoroughly enjoy browsing through it. You can find lots of information here about my jobs, my extracurricular activities & all of the other things I can do! Then, check out all of my, like, fabulous links…
What's wrong here?
1. Watch out for "obnoxious" punctuation. This includes the
excessive use of exclamation points and question marks.
2. Don't be a comma draper; use them only when needed.
3. Type everything out - it's only two more letters to type to replace
the ampersand (&).
4. Varying sentence form entails not only using different amounts of thoughts.
Consider using punctuation marks like semicolons to spice up your writing.
Corrected paragraph:
Welcome to my site! We spent a lot of time making this and hope that you thoroughly enjoy browsing through it. You can find lots of information here about my jobs, my extracurricular activities, and all of the other things I can do. Then, check out all of my, like, fabulous links.
Hint: Stay updated
Be sure to stay up to date with your grammar skills. Grammar standards
change frequently, and, especially in the modern world of the Internet,
you need to stay on top of any new standards.
